Editing

I am a writer, teacher, and editor with five years of editing experience. For the last three years, I’ve solicited and edited essays for The Nervous Breakdown. Before that I worked for other magazines, such as Pithead Chapel and The Review Review.

My editorial services are for prose writers. I can edit for grammar and clarity with line edits and then plot, structure, character, etcetera, with the full developmental edit. I am great with flash, short stories, novels, essays, and memoir.

Each service will be tailored to your needs, so contact me and let’s chat about your project.

Praise for Bernard’s Editing Services

“A careful and considerate reader, Bernard is both insightful and pleasant to work with.”
– Tatiana Ryckman, author of I Don’t Think of You (Until I Do)

“Bernard is an insightful and generous reader. He provides the kind of feedback that inspires better writing, and his edits have improved more than one of my stories.”
– Meagan Macvie author of Ocean in My Ears 

“For the past 5 years that I have known Bernard, I’ve been truly impressed with how he approaches editing. Whether he’s editing my work or if we’re working together on editing a writer’s submission to The Nervous Breakdown, I’m always amazed by the way that Bernard edits not just for the glaring issues, but attends to the little things that make a huge impact. He’s also really great at being honest with the writer, as well as cheering them on. A true professional and a very supportive editor, I feel blessed that I get to work with Bernard.​”
– Chelsey Clammer, author of BodyHome and Circadian

“Bernard is a careful, supportive editor. He gently reminded me of basic things (like being specific) while also showing me more sophisticated uses of the structure I was working in, thereby improving the overall aesthetic experience of my piece, including opening the door to more humor.”
-Anca Szilágyi, author of Daughters of the Air

“Having worked with him in both capacities, I am impressed with Bernard as a writer and as an editor. His prose has a unique sense of style, strong narrative, and insistent voice, and his editorial eye is keenly focused on helping others showcase craft and storytelling in their work. You’ll enjoy working with him!”
– Lisa Romeo, author of Starting with Goodbye: A Daughter’s Memoir of Love after Loss; Creative Nonfiction Editor, Compose Journal; and contributor, The Nervous Breakdown and Pithead Chapel

“Bernard works with you to create a better world. One with less grammar mistakes and fewer words. The changes he helped me make we’re innumerable and I will continue to have him work with me through multiple books. I highly recommend going with Bernard for your editing services!”
– Josh Mercer